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A pediatric doctor at the Children's Hospital of Philadelphia was killed while riding her bike in Center City on Wednesday night.

https://www.nbcphiladelphia.com/news/local/deadly-3-car-crash-rittenhouse-philadelphia/3915690/

The original post on the Philadelphia subreddit https://www.reddit.com/r/philadelphia/comments/1e5wkv0/insane_accident_on_18th_and_spruce/

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[–] apfelwoiSchoppen@lemmy.world 216 points 4 months ago* (last edited 4 months ago) (41 children)

A pediatric doctor at the Children's Hospital of Philadelphia was killed while riding her bike in Center City on Wednesday night.

The use of passive voice in the first sentence does a lot of work shifting blame away from the driver and the car centric systems in an "objective" effort.

How about:

Cyclist Barbara Friedes died when the driver of a car hit her in the bike lane on Wednesday night.

[–] sem@lemmy.blahaj.zone 25 points 4 months ago (5 children)

"Car driver kills doctor on bicycle"

[–] apfelwoiSchoppen@lemmy.world 2 points 4 months ago* (last edited 4 months ago) (3 children)

Works too, though more specific on assignment of judgment. Part of the point for me is to assign blame to the system in which we all must live.

[–] sem@lemmy.blahaj.zone 0 points 4 months ago (1 children)

We can make that point in the article, the headline is for drawing attention

[–] apfelwoiSchoppen@lemmy.world 1 points 4 months ago (1 children)

I'm not critiquing the headline, I'm critiquing the first sentence.

[–] sem@lemmy.blahaj.zone 2 points 4 months ago

Oh true. I was writing a headline lol

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