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Roast my Landing Page! Need to increase my conversion rate! (alien.top)

submitted 11 months ago by DistinctTaste7878@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

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[–] Visual_Youth_5073@alien.top 1 points 11 months ago (1 children)

The website checks off a lot of boxes, but really the issue is messaging. Like why should I buy a $50 cat play stick over a $5 one at Petsmart? I think you need to show your product in use more or have testimonials.

[–] DistinctTaste7878@alien.top 1 points 11 months ago

That's very true. I think I need more UGC and reviews.

And to your question - our cat wand is the only one where you can attach toys/baits directly at the tip. The other "solid stick" designs have all been single use, and our cats love the variety that it offers to have both with and without string!