this post was submitted on 30 Nov 2023
1 points (100.0% liked)
Entrepreneur
0 readers
1 users here now
Rules
- No Personal Attacks - criticism of ideas is allowed, attacking people is not.
- Self Posts Only - links can only provide supplementary material. Your post must contain enough content to have a discussion.
- No “How To Get Rich Quick” posts - This community is not about making a quick buck. Posts asking the community how to make $X, without making specific reference to a reasonable idea, are not tolerated.
- Avoid unprofessional communication - Please treat fellow entrepreneurs like respected coworkers, label conversations if NSFW and avoid deliberate provocations.
Please feel free to provide evidence-based best practices, share a micro-victory, discuss strategy and concepts with a frame work, ask for feedback, and create professional conversation. Treat every post as if you're at work and representing the best version of yourself.
founded 10 months ago
MODERATORS
you are viewing a single comment's thread
view the rest of the comments
view the rest of the comments
Some simple improvement tips:
Make your logo clickable (direct to homepage)
Show a picture of someone wearing your shirt in the hero section instead of the long description. Or any image of your product at this point or maybe just a simple graphic showing a simple short line like, “Monochromatic Fashion Brand” something easy to understand and straightforward.
Your product pages need to be more readable, adjust the hierarchy and make some fonts smaller, add some space between different sections and sub sections.
The reviews section is too dull, make it brighter or try to make it much clearer to read
Your about us section should come after you show your products on the homepage
Instead of a slider try showing all your products in a stack since you only have a few products at the moment, the users don’t have to swipe a few times just to see the few products you have. And most people will stop swiping after the first or second product. If you make it stacked they’ll sure see all the products as they keep scrolling and makes your website feel abit more professional. Because right mowing the site is too short and ends too fast. Not much content for me to see.