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I am 20M from india, I want to build software agency but I suck at pitching people. What can I do. (alien.top)

submitted 1 year ago by jsg-developer@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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I have a job that suck, toxic people can't bear them anymore. I have 3 months before my internship is completed. So i decided to start my software agency. I built my website https://jsgdevelopers.com/. I bought a bunch of leads from fiverr, basically those businesses who had shitty website. I pitched about 5 people but no one is even responding back. I feel really demotivated. Here is one of the email i sent just for example

Dear [Customer Name],

I hope this message finds you well. I've had the pleasure of reviewing your pressure washing website , and I believe there are two critical areas for improvement.

Design: A captivating design is essential to leave a lasting impression. Our expertise lies in crafting sleek, modern designs that captivate your audience.

Mobile-Friendliness: In today's digital landscape, mobile compatibility is paramount, especially for a service-oriented business like yours. We specialize in creating seamless experiences across all devices.

I'd be honored to collaborate with you on building a website that truly reflects the potential of . Let's chat further about how we can make this happen.

Looking forward to the possibility of working together.

Warm regards,

My Name

and company logo and website link and mobile number and location as signature

I don't know what is wrong. Are my emails not personalized enough? (i even attached some screenshot of their website in 1 of cold email). Is it sounding fishy? Or its just luck not working out

Any help would be highly appreciated

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[–] AdProper5967@alien.top 1 points 1 year ago

Lol only 5 and your waiting for results u should at least send 100 a day for 100 days that'll almost guarantee you having a client

And don't use chat-gpt for writing emails or tell it to make shorter and simpler

Don't tell the prospect what will you do(of course you have to) but your focus should be on what will the changes you made do to their business

ex. Convert 20% more viewers into buyers that's 5% extra profit in just 2 weeks

Watch Alex hormozi you need to binge watching him and read his books

From $100M leads you could make your lead magnet free SEO there's alot to do