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Roast my landing page 🔥 (alien.top)

submitted 1 year ago by sausageroll5000@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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Hi everyone, I've finished my landing page for my Design as a Service product for SaaS companies. I'd really like some feedback so here's the link: https://www.tajen.studio/. This is the first iteration of the page and I really tried not to overcomplicate things as I have a terrible habit of being too much of a perfectionist. So I always try to think of the quote: "Perfectionism is procrastination masquerading as quality control.”

I'd like to know:

If my value proposition is clear
If you're a SaaS company, is this a service you might consider? If not, could you elaborate on why not?
general comments on what you like and don't like about the page

If you're familiar with DesignJoy, then you've seen this model before. I've done a few things differently such as niching down (SaaS companies), only taking a set number of clients at a time, and actually doing some meetings (I like getting to know the clients, it seems more personal!).

Thank you for reading this and for your time if you do provide feedback!

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[–] CompanyCraft@alien.top 1 points 1 year ago

Congrats on getting started! A couple of notes:

-The font in your hero title is too "fancy" and slowed my eyes down (in a bad way, had to read it twice). I'd go with something simpler

-I don't think many people will pay you £2k/mo without some strong social proof. I'd suggest getting 5-10 clients at any pricepoint that will write testimonials you can then put near the top of the page to show that the work you do is legit. Then you can charge £2k/mo.