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Feedback On Business Site (alien.top)

submitted 10 months ago by IdeaCard@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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Feedback Wanted!

I recently started a web design service “Site Solvers”. I completed 7 websites the last 2 months. After my skills increased, I wanted to redo my original website. This is the temporary finished product sitesolversplus.com

Please provided your overall opinions and suggestions to improve on how my business website flows on mobile and desktop. I started custom blank slate and this is the first one completed without a template.

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[–] AnonJian@alien.top 1 points 10 months ago (1 children)

Extremely information poor. Piles on the vapid superficial gimmicks. Blurbs go left, go right, break the reader's flow -- yet say nothing.

It is unclear if you know what a brand is or if you designed that restaurant interior. Shouldn't the clients have something, anything to say? No testimonials on a brand development site says something, but it's nothing you want to hear.

I suggest -- with marketoids everywhere claiming to do branding services -- you should be able to write a book on brand development. Your About Us is generic and could describe those who aren't in brand development. That's why I suggest a Why Choose Us page to get newbies head's screwed on straight.

Much mischief is conducted under the guise of brand development, you have explaining to do.

[–] IdeaCard@alien.top 1 points 10 months ago

Thank you for your honest opinion. I will be adding feedback to the site for sure, but I have not gathered them yet. You are right I should make it more directed towards website instead of branding. I love the why choose us page idea, thank you. What do you mean I have explaining to do ?