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Hi rem4ik4ever :)
First comment: Unclear value statement at readers' first glance. You don't say it til the very end, "Unlock Efficient Booking!". E.g. check this out: https://www.reddit.com/r/SaaS/comments/17tjr3i/i_analyzed_100_hero_sections_of_mostly_saas/