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I think your copy needs a little bit of work, there are some typos and it doesn't read in a very exciting way - I would contract it to someone on Fiverr, shouldn't be too expensive.
Your product is an AI website generator, which is very cool and should get me excited, but the copy doesn't reflect that.
Nice page design though.