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I made this video a few days ago and uploaded on Youtube. I need feedback from you. Tell me what do you think about this video so I can make better content in future! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=902vugDneDM&t=12s
Please no hate
What's worse, no hate, or no comments?
I am here trying to get reasoned responses and feedback. If there are like 20 comments saying "Your content is sh!t and k!ll yourself" that is not going to help me and makes it harder to find those good comments I was looking for
Okay here is my best. You want feedback on a video. You say in the video your videos are shitposts made in a day. Are you trolling? Are you lying? And if you're doing neither, why should you expect anyone to care about some shit you made in a day? The AI voiceover, bad. You show a bad 3D model, joke about it, then show the real model which is almost as bad but has color. More bad models. The game in the editor looks terrible in every way a game can. Then you switch to some infini-runner mobile game and say youtube thinks you're a bot and that's why nobody watches your videos (that's not why they're very, very bad) so like and subscribe begging ensues with a loud as fuck ear rape sound. It was at this point that I lost all interest in you and your aspirations.
Thanks for your feedback. And what you said about the looks of the game. I agree that It looks like shit. It doesn't have any shaders, any particles, any post processing and the colors are off. This is a devlog about the game. Probably the game will look completely different from this towards the end. Now I am focusing on getting the systems and core mechanics done. And I am not the best 3d artist.
Oh boy.
I want to support content creators, especially the ones willing to post to Lemmy.
This also reminds me of kids just trying out creative pursuits for the first time, what with "Please no hate" in the title instead of using the title like an actual title and asking commenters to be gentle in the post body. Not wanting hate is just a normal and understandable desire, so I feel bad for even saying that, but I also only ever saw that kind of thing in the title of a post when I was 9 and looking at stuff fellow kids put online. Most creators, even those seeking feedback (and I've seen a lot of those), will put a request to be gentle in the post body. Their title actually tells you about their content and tries its damndest to appeal to you.
"Tell me what do you think about this video" also isn't 100% perfect English. I mean, who among us hasn't made a screwup before with the English language? But somehow this just… really reminds me of kids trying out creative pursuits for the first time. I can't really explain it.
I think I'm also expecting a description of what your video is even about in the body, and your message could apply to any video uploaded. A makeup tutorial, a math lesson, an avant-garde art piece… I assume it has to do with gaming given you posted it in !gaming@lemmy.world, but that is all I know. Something about this just feels weird and wrong and I figured I might as well help you (since you did ask for feedback) by trying to explain why I feel so, so offput by this post.
Also, I opened the video, saw the #dani hashtag, and thought "oh that guy that person on Lemmy was trying to promote," had a hunch, and checked your profile to find you are that person on Lemmy who was promoting him. So I admit I have that experience coloring my perception of your post.
Thank you! The title was supposed to say/mean please no unreasonable hate. I meant that the hate had to be reasoned. This lack of skill to write what I mean takes us to your next point. My English is pretty bad because English is not my main language that I speak. I probably know the parts where you thought that my english was bad and to be honest I admit that when I wrote the script to the text to speech bot I didn't realize how dumb it was going to sound. I'll try better in the future!
My earlier comment almost had a section that said "and if English is your second language, sorry in advance about all the incorrect assumptions! Learning a second language is difficult."
Best wishes! I do think you would find better reception if you put more information about what you are posting about in the title and body.