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Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

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[–] junglepiehelmet@alien.top 1 points 2 years ago

The video launches for me without sound and is not good quality. Its very grainy.

The "Meet Forever Stick" text box overlaps the video awkwardly and cuts out the top right corner of the video

There is a lot of space between the top text box near the video to the next text boxes. You need more even spacing.

Images are too big. You're trying to keep the text boxes the same size as the images but that creates a lot of dead space while scrolling.

The first review doesnt display the entire review for me. There's no view more button as well.

Good luck!