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Roast my Landing Page! Need to increase my conversion rate! (alien.top)

submitted 11 months ago by DistinctTaste7878@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

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[–] seeyouintheyear3000@alien.top 1 points 11 months ago

If I’m coming to this page from an ad, why do I need the TikTok style attention catcher video? I’d imagine the video would have already been in the ad so you should be serving information about the customer could get from the toy, you already have their curiosity piqued

The video also takes too long to load, if you’re coming from an ad and need to wait 1-2s a lot of people are gonna bounce

Also why can’t I buy straight from the landing page? Should be a one tap to buy right at the bottom