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Roast my Landing Page! Need to increase my conversion rate! (alien.top)

submitted 2 years ago by DistinctTaste7878@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

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[–] AverageLiberalJoe@alien.top 1 points 2 years ago

Pictures maybe it look cheap. Color theme make it look cheap. Video is too fast and doesn't show me any of the value you claim your product has. Also it looks like a tik tok video which immediately make me think 'fake'. And the video also looks cheap.

At least your selling proposition was up front and center but the price was not. "Unbreakable cat you holder" ok fine, I had a cat. I don't remember that being a problem i ever wished was solved but maybe someone else does.

Im typing now and I can't remember what it was even called. If have no way of speaking word of mouth even if I wanted to.

It looks like you have zero sales and make this at home. As in there is no social proof. I don't want to be the first guy to send you money.

If it was my product, I think Id try to tell a story about a guy who made a company to sell innovative and high quality pet toys after getting frustrated with cheap imported garbage filled with microplastics and factory residue from big name pet brands who don't actually have animal friendly business practices.