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Roast my website (alien.top)

submitted 11 months ago by ProjectRU4Real@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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I just semi-launched my website but am looking to improve it. Can you guys roast it?

https://www.aiwhooschool.com/

I would appreciate any feedback and tips!

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[–] KernalHispanic@alien.top 1 points 11 months ago

With all do respect, I think your name is horrible. It absolutely fails the telephone test. Every time you tell someone about the site, you are going to have to spell it out to them.

My other criticism is that I think you use the bold font a little too much. If everything is bolded, nothing is bolded if that make sense (read about information hierarchy in Refactoring UI). The bold and choice of font honestly affects legibility in some instances too e.g "mail" in the footer.

Lastly, I think that you need to list the benefits of teaching your kid to code. When I go to your website, there's nothing there that's going to sell me. The little benefits section you have in the pricing page is good, but I think you should have some in the landing page.

Here is some example copy for the landing page I had ChatGPT make for you:

Foster Creativity and Innovation: Every lesson is a new adventure into the world of coding, where kids can unleash their imagination and bring their unique ideas to life.

Build Critical Thinking Skills: Through engaging coding challenges, children learn to think logically and solve problems systematically, skills that are vital in today's digital world.

Real-World Tech Skills for the Future: Our curriculum is designed to give your child a head start in technology. They won’t just play games; they’ll learn how to create them, setting a strong foundation for future learning in STEM fields.

A Fun and Engaging Learning Environment: Who says learning can’t be fun? Our interactive lessons make coding as exciting as playing a video game, ensuring that children are always engaged and eager to learn more.

Personalized Learning at Their Own Pace: Every child is unique, and our program adapts to their learning style and pace. Whether your child is a beginner or already a budding coder, our courses grow with them.

Honestly overall the site looks pretty good. Good luck to you!