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I think it's good for a semi launch. I looked first on mobile then on laptop. I agree with some of the other comments, there's a lot to like in terms of clarity of your offering and the overall vibe.
I think it looks better on laptop than on mobile where you lose the nice geometry details and it looks a bit boring.
The only things that really stood out - in a bad way - were the name and the logo. You need to get more creative with that. Ask ChatGPT for 20 name ideas and explore all the 'top level domain' options, eg .ai, .academy, .xyz etc (there are loads) if you can't find a good .com. And then use either an AI generator or something like DesignCrowd to get yourself a good logo.
I like the bold all caps, it's fun, but maybe it's a little overdone. A bit too bold - is there another cut of it? And maybe used too often.
Finally, people always want to see some things they recognise and trust. You've got some endorsements from Johnny and Jackie Random, but they could be made up. Do you have any affiliations, partnerships or press coverage so you could drop some logos in there? Even if it's just the software and resources you use.
Good luck.