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Roast My Website and Offering (alien.top)

submitted 10 months ago by scare-destinyy@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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I've been developing the website for my side gig recently. After achieving some success in creating sales funnels for the energy and SaaS sectors, I decided to double down on it to streamline the process and create a dedicated website.
What are your thoughts? Does it clearly highlight the offerings and benefits? If you were in my target audience, would you be interested to try?

https://venger.me

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[–] IdeaCard@alien.top 1 points 10 months ago (1 children)

Information wise you hit all of the areas needed.

I feel your site could have a bit less words. It’s a bit much to scroll through. I would suggest to add “more information” drop down buttons to shorten the scroll. Some call to actions and book now buttons would be good in the middle of the scrolls as well. Perhaps a text change as well to make it easier to read ? That’s my personal eyes tho maybe it’s fine for others.

I just started my own web design business : Site Solvers Our styles are a bit different I can see. Your information heavy while I went less information on home page and was very direct on my service page.

If you have time, should check me out and provide your opinion as well :)

Good luck with your business !! I wish you the best.

[–] scare-destinyy@alien.top 1 points 10 months ago

Thanks a bunch. I'll integrate those suggestions.

And shortly I'll hit you up in DM with feedback on your website.