Way too much text imo
Queue the “I ain’t reading all that” meme
this post was submitted on 13 Nov 2023
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Ain’t nobody got time fo dat!
got you, thanks for chiming in :)
Will trim it down then.
Too much text. A little bit less of the process and more of selling. Show me prices and examples of your work, that’s all just words, I need results. Also I don’t want to see your face, more aprópiate would be you with your tram and on the back the office.
Got you, thanks for chiming in.
Will work on that, including photos.
Too few CTAs (calls to action).
I'd litter your text with "book free call now" buttons.
More is more with CTAs.
Understood, will litter the text with those buttons.
Thanks for the input!
I like it. Clearly connects with the customers pain points and how your solutions can alleviate their pain.
Clean, easy to ready. Direct. No fluff. Case studies. Checks a lot of boxes.
Thanks a bunch for sharing your thoughts, appreciate it! 🙏
Information wise you hit all of the areas needed.
I feel your site could have a bit less words. It’s a bit much to scroll through. I would suggest to add “more information” drop down buttons to shorten the scroll. Some call to actions and book now buttons would be good in the middle of the scrolls as well. Perhaps a text change as well to make it easier to read ? That’s my personal eyes tho maybe it’s fine for others.
I just started my own web design business : Site Solvers Our styles are a bit different I can see. Your information heavy while I went less information on home page and was very direct on my service page.
If you have time, should check me out and provide your opinion as well :)
Good luck with your business !! I wish you the best.
Thanks a bunch. I'll integrate those suggestions.
And shortly I'll hit you up in DM with feedback on your website.
I want to roast your hairstyle instead….
I agree there’s too much text & should be more pictures.
But you gotta chill with the generic stock photos of random people that don’t exist lol.
Invest in real photography.
Thanks a bunch, I'm already looking for a photographer to make those :)
5000+ cups of coffee is a bit weird to say there. That’s 13 years of coffee at 1 cup a day, so if anything you’re just aging yourself on the site, or making it a very weird guessing game to figure out how many clients you had coffee with.
Oh, that's a sound advice.
I drink 3-5 cups a day. And those aren't the cups exclusively drank with clients.
Though since it sounds unclear, I'll update it :)
I don’t see any problem with the amount of text, I think the website is great and easy to navigate.
Thanks a bunch :)