Distinct-Isopod-269

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[–] Distinct-Isopod-269@alien.top 1 points 11 months ago

I can tell you attempted a self promo with story telling here but the logical progression is a mess and makes it hard to understand what you’re trying to convey.

Also the random link drop in the middle makes no sense and the title is pretty misleading.

Focus on providing value to readers somehow and they’ll be 100x more likely to be interested in what you have to sell

Blockbuster was such an amazing idea at the time!!