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Roast my Landing Page! Need to increase my conversion rate! (alien.top)

submitted 2 years ago by DistinctTaste7878@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

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[–] Efficient_Ad2461@alien.top 1 points 2 years ago

Hey!

Here are the changes I would make to your landing page:

Have the photos either professionally taken or 3D rendered. The current ones look like they were taken for an e-bay listing. The ones on the PDP are a little better.
Communicate what the product is more clearly. You should be able to comprehend what the product is and what pain points the product solves without even scrolling. I didn't understand either. I also didn't even realize it was a cat wand until I got to the PDP.
Too much white space. You have a ton of empty space on your page. Especially above the fold - which is oceanfront real estate. Use this space to sell the product.
Clarify the offer. On the landing page, it says "pre-order yours today". But the product page doesn't mention anything about a pre-order.

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