Hey!
Here are the changes I would make to your landing page:
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Have the photos either professionally taken or 3D rendered. The current ones look like they were taken for an e-bay listing. The ones on the PDP are a little better.
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Communicate what the product is more clearly. You should be able to comprehend what the product is and what pain points the product solves without even scrolling. I didn't understand either. I also didn't even realize it was a cat wand until I got to the PDP.
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Too much white space. You have a ton of empty space on your page. Especially above the fold - which is oceanfront real estate. Use this space to sell the product.
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Clarify the offer. On the landing page, it says "pre-order yours today". But the product page doesn't mention anything about a pre-order.
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If I were to point out something that I have noticed commonly in this crowd is ideas without thoughtful, actionable plans. I think that good ideas are not hard to come by. The difference between entrepreneurs and wantrepreneurs is that entrepreneurs spend a lot more time developing their plan - cost/benefit analysis, answering what/how/why, 80/20 decisions, etc.
I've started a vibrant community where I document my venture into building a direct-to-consumer supplement business. If you're passionate about business and crave involvement in a community that fosters learning through shared experiences, provides guidance, and facilitates feedback among entrepreneurial minds, this is the perfect space for you.
Join us and become an integral part of a community dedicated to mutual growth and success.
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