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Roast my Landing Page! Need to increase my conversion rate! (alien.top)

submitted 9 months ago by DistinctTaste7878@alien.top to c/entrepreneur@indiehackers.space

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Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

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[–] orange-capri-sun@alien.top 1 points 9 months ago (1 children)

I am indeed, and I'm compelled to buy the product, it's genuinely something I'd put my money into knowing it's tried and tested instead of buying loads of the cheaper options bc they always snap

[–] DistinctTaste7878@alien.top 1 points 9 months ago (1 children)

Thank you! If you’d be open to it I’d love to have a quick video call with you, just to get feedback and hear your thoughts on the product and on our messaging. Then I can also properly show the product for you! Let me know if you would consider this. Thanks!

[–] orange-capri-sun@alien.top 1 points 9 months ago (1 children)

Sure I'm open to it! Send me a dm and I'll get back to you as soon as I can!

[–] DistinctTaste7878@alien.top 1 points 9 months ago

Awesome, DM sent!